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I thought I saw a fairy flutter on the wind. She was a fairy, that was sure, all decked out in green. I saw her peek inside a flower, to see what was within. I saw the look of joy and glee as she reached to pull the dew drop out! What a sight to behold, a little fairy on the prowl, looking for magic in God's creation! I watched to see what she'd do, why did she need that? She fluttered around with her little drop, looking for the right spot. Suddenly, she spied something and turned to fly away. Across the yard glided another little fairy, this one clad in orange. She too carried a drop of dew. What were these dew drops for?
The fairy in green popped out from the tree behind which she hid and tossed her dew drop at the fairy so orange - splat! Target hit square on the head! "I win! I win!" The green fairy cried in joyous fashion. "I'll get you tomorrow!" laughed the wet little fairy, "Just you wait and see!"
That was a very warm and fuzzy piece. Adorable description of a fairy water fight! It was just a cute little picture of a world we all wish we lived in. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteHa ha, that was gorgeous Zanre. I loved it!
ReplyDelete"Warm and fuzzy" describes it perfectly. I love that the fairies' reason to fly around in search of dew drops is a game and not something mystical or "important". Mythological creatures can also have fun!
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I love this!! I am a fan of faires so when I read this story I yelped with glee! Perfect description of both faires. :)
ReplyDeleteI saw a fairy too, of a different kind. Fairy fights, very sweet.
ReplyDeleteI love the creativity and playfulness here!
ReplyDeleteAdorably sweet! I love the creativity, and the light structure of this. The ending is cute also!
ReplyDeleteFairies are so fun. Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteOh, very sweet! So light-hearted - just the kind of story I'd love to have read as a child.
ReplyDeleteIs this the cutest or what?! What a gorgeous little scene you've created. I agree with Jayne, could make a lovely little children's story.
ReplyDeleteThis would make a beautiful children's story. Lovely.
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